New Business in the area

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aliaykac
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New Business in the area

Post by aliaykac »

http://www.xxxxxxxxxxxx.co.uk what do u guys think
Annie.
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Re: New Business in the area

Post by Annie. »

Two things,1/ why have you got buns around the edge of your leaflet when you want to sell soft drink? 2/ it should say "Those " heavy bags not " them" Having said that,
I don't really drink soft drinks,but a family with children probably would, I have never heard of anyone else offering this service, so good luck to you I wish you well.

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aliaykac
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Re: New Business in the area

Post by aliaykac »

aww thank u annie yeh the person that disigned my leaflet done that theres is a few spelling mistakes to but o well what can u do lol
Eagle
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Re: New Business in the area

Post by Eagle »

If I am not mistaken all drinks laden with sugar to make the country more fat.

Not for me.
Annie.
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Re: New Business in the area

Post by Annie. »

Yes I did notice a few mistakes, to be honest if you want to be taken as a serious business you need to look professional,if people see mistakes in your presentation,they may think you not reliable. You would be better off canvassing people to see if the business is a viable one before spending a lot of money on your advertising,Personally I would get the spelling/grammar right,and do away with the buns!, you cannot afford to say you saw mistakes "but what can I do" because you are in charge !
But I wish you well, it sounds like a good idea.

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CaptainCarCrash
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Re: New Business in the area

Post by CaptainCarCrash »

Tanyo orange?
Dr Pepeer?
Per Cases?

Never heard of Tanyo or Dr Pepeer? and to pluralise a single item is a crime.

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Rachael
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Re: New Business in the area

Post by Rachael »

Yeah, but you don't have to carry 'them' bags of Dr Pepeer or Tanyo.

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admin
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Re: New Business in the area

Post by admin »

I merged the two threads and masked the address. This is because the website appears to be trading illegally and not located in this area but in Ashford, Kent.

The OP is welcome to PM me to clarify the situation.

Admin
Rachael
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Re: New Business in the area

Post by Rachael »

Aw, and there was me all ready to call that mobile number with my credit card details to hand.

Edit - apparently it's cash on delivery.

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leenewham
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Re: New Business in the area

Post by leenewham »

Isn't this just spam?
Voyageur
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Re: New Business in the area

Post by Voyageur »

leenewham wrote:Isn't this just spam?
Undoubtedly
Eagle
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Re: New Business in the area

Post by Eagle »

Used to like spam fritters for school dinners, especially with lashings of gravy.
Annie.
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Re: New Business in the area

Post by Annie. »

Far too much grease for me Eagle

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Eagle
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Re: New Business in the area

Post by Eagle »

Not sure I would eat now. I remember often having gravy dripping at home. Doubt if it would be permitted nowadays.
Annie.
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Re: New Business in the area

Post by Annie. »

I was brought up on beef dripping on bread covered in salt! Yummy, couldnt touch the stuff now.

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Eagle
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Re: New Business in the area

Post by Eagle »

Yes just like I recall Annie. Loved it. Cannot imagine what damage it was doing.
Annie.
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Re: New Business in the area

Post by Annie. »

Did you ever have sugar on bread Eagle? Again, god help our health!

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Eagle
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Re: New Business in the area

Post by Eagle »

No strange as it may seem did not manage that.

Never liked much sugar on anything.
Annie.
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Re: New Business in the area

Post by Annie. »

Haha,its ok Eagle it was probably just my family who did it, sometimes that was our evening meal,couldnt afford anything else,but at least it was homemade! ;0))

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Rachael
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Re: New Business in the area

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We had sugar on apple slices. Dinner was often Golden Syrup sandwiches.

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